precious feelings held so tightly
breathing whispers oh so slightly
secrets lanced with rusted blade
usefull cards are wrongly played
hold me tightly
don't let me go
open seams
i just can't sew
don't forgive me
but don't cast me away
forget what I did
and just hold me today
precious oh precious
I just can't let go
my arms still around you
thought you should know
(unfinished, might redo)
©2003-2009 ~zenaoadalat7676
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>_O this has little effort in it, I might redo
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i recently had an experience somewhat relating to this poem... and so its no shock to me that my favorite lines are:
"don't forgive me but don't cast me away"
wowza...
i dig... hee hee...
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